Synopsis Development Discussion - First Draft

During the script development disscussion we talked in depth about the first draft of my script. We covered the following:

•  Grammatical errors 
• The strength of the dilemma of the protagonist, We decided that the dilemma was to open there was not two choice of what the man could do in response to the boys actions. 
• Referring the Marilynn Milgrom we looked at whether or not the story was being told from the best POV eventually coming to the mutual agreement that the story might have been better told from the POV of the young boy. This change meet the requirements offered by Marilynn Milgrom better than the previous idea.
• We also discussed the end of the short and where would be a good place to end the film.

Click here to read the second draft of my synopsis

Categories: Writing and Development