Synopsis Development Discussion - Fourth Draft

During the discussion we covered:


  • Grammer and spelling. This included questioning the way I had written some of the synopsis and if it conformed to the synopsis writing convention used in the film industry. 
  • We also discussed the time that Rob stays in the room after entering the first time, We decided that it was un-plausable for him to instantly be interested in the room, The idea of going in should play on his mind.
  • Jacks cough was also discussed and we both agreed that it took tension away from the film. 

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