Script First Draft


EXT. LOCAL PARK - DAY
ROB has his face being pushed into the ground by BEN and LEWIS. 
BEN
You a vegetarian or somein?
Lewis and Ben laugh. 
ROB 
  (Wimpers)
No
LEWIS 
Well throw the fucking egg then you little prick.
CUT TO 
INT. JACKS KITCHEN - DAY 
JACK is sitting at the table looking at his at cup of tea. 
INT. JACKS LIVING ROOM - DAY
An egg hits the window of the empty room. 
INT. JACKS KITCHEN - DAY 
Jack is sitting in a dully coloured kitchen;. looks down the hallway to the sound from where the egg hit but them resumes staring at his tea. 
EXT. JACKS LIVING ROOM - DAY 
The egg drips down the window of the living room. You see the reflection of Ben and Lewis play fighting with Rob again. 
Lewis and Ben have let Rob go and now stand either side of him. 
LEWIS 
See bruv this is why people boy you, fucking pussy (kisses teeth) 
ROB 
Come bruv please
LEWIS 
Oi shutup bruv  fuckin' dick'ead 
Lewis takes a step towards Rob who quickly runs back. 
INT. JACKS KITCHEN - DAY 
Rob stops on the doorstep and brushes his feet on the door mat.
INT. JACKS HALLWAY - DAY 
Rob is walking down the hallway. Its dully lit and dusty. He looks into a room thats full of sketches and photos. He pauses at the door to look in. After a few seconds he carries on walking.
INT. JACKS LIVING ROOM - DAY 
A medal is show sitting on a shelf on display next to a picture of jack in a army uniform. Rob walks over grabs it and shoves it in his pocket. He stops and looks at the photo. He looks around before walking back towards the door. 
INT. JACKS LIVING ROOM - DAY 
The art room is letting off light that is flowing out into the darker hallway. The light is blocked by the figure of Rob. Rob walks into the room and starts to look at the wooden figures and sketches on the walls. He picks up a painting and smudges a bit of the paint before quickly placing it back where he found it. He picks up a book and starts to look through it, There is notes and pictures stuffed inside, as he starts to look through the extracts Jack wheels himself into the room behind Rob. Rob turns around startled and goes to run out the room but hesitates when he releases that Jack is blocking the only exit.
JACK 
It's fine (long pause) That was from my first tour
Jack goes towards Rob and takes the book out of his hands. Rob looks on at him bewildered. 
JACK 
I got a telling off for sleeping on watch that year, was only menna be watching the office (laughs lightheartedly) Mum gave me the book before I went reckoned I should write stuff in it.
Rob looks around more for an exit but slightly calmer. Jack makes a long pause as he looks down at the battered book.
JACK
It was my second tour this happened it was just after we'd had easter lunch. Roast lamb mates reckon it was as dry as the shit sandbox we was in.
A picture of Jack and a group of other men in the army falls out as he sees it he just stares down at the picture. 
JACK 
Theses guys ar... are... are  
Jack attempts to finish he's sentence but starts to stutter and cry as he does.
ROB 
I've gotta go
Rob walks around a broken down Jack and walks quickly towards the front door.
EXT. JACKS FRONT DOOR - DAY
Rob steps outside and takes a deep breath and looks around. 
INT. JACKS HALLWAY - DAY
A doorbox is pushed open slowly and a medal falls through the door. 

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