Alternative Synopsis First Draft
Posted on 06:19 by Sam Ivermee
A man is shown restlessly sleeping at night, You see him again nervously awake in the morning. The man is shown in his house making breakfast in a very organised way. The bin is show with several bin bags around the actual bin which is also almost full. He's feeding fish on the coffee table in the living room. As he's feeding the fish a car pulls up outside his house. A stressed looking woman gets out the car holding several bags struggling to hold them all. A young girl walks along behind her holding an action man in an army outfit. When the man opens the door the woman is halfway down the driveway and asks him if he could take one of the bags. The man freezes on the doorstep and doesn't move until the woman is at the door with a disapproving look the woman drops the bags inside the door. The young girl is urged inside by her mum. Her mum thanks the man for looking after her and rushes off back to the car. The girl is shown playing inside with the man with the action man toy that she had been playing with previously. The room is scattered out with colouring books and toys. The man freezes slightly during the game with the toy doll. He gets up and tells the girl he's going to make a drink in the kitchen. In the kitchen the man is show having a panic attack but manages to control himself he looks around and the girl is standing there watching him with a confused look on her face. The man smiles and suggests they play a different game. The man says hide and seek then turns around and starts counting the little girl runs away the man. You see that later in the day there still playing there game. The man is pretending to be a monster and chasing the girl through the house giggling the girl opens the door and runs outside the man runs towards the door but freezes at the doorframe. The girl runs out over the road and is hit by a car the girl starts screaming. The man is shown collapsed at the door still.
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