Synopsis Development Discussion - Second Draft

Discussing the second draft we muttally decided that:

• Due to a limited time frame starting the film later into the situation. This would also allow for better unity of time, place and action. A point that Marilyn Milgrim raised in her article 'The Script' 
• The limited time frame also was making it hard for empathy for main character to be made, we agreed that the disability should be made more obvious by having him in a wheel chair.
• The dilemma of the young boy is one that needs to be brought to the audiences obvious attention sooner.
• The journey of the two main characters wasn't one that was made clear. We discussed where the film should end and how that would help finish of the moral journey and self growing of both characters. 

To read the third draft of my synopsis click here.

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